Argumentative

Dear all...
I hope you won't be bored with my reflective blog which always tell you about our writing class. In this week, we only had a workshop about argumentative paragraph. I made many mistakes in this paragraph, not only about the composition of the paragraph, but also from the grammatical aspects. hufffhhh....

last week, I identified Kajol's paragraph. she wrote about Electronic facilities in Ma'had. It was really interesting. Before I read her paragraph, I didn't know that foreign students are allowed to use electronic facilities excessively. but in her paragraph, she didn't wrote about the opposing argument. 
and about my mistakes in my paragraph, I didn't give the example in the parargraph. and also about the grammar, I think I was really careless when wrote it. 

overall, making argumentative paragraph is more difficult than making other types paragraph before. and may be the types of paragraph that we will write will be more difficult more and more.
so we have to be more spirit to learn about every kinds of paragraph.

hay guys....
this week we only had some workshops, because there was no presenter who presented their paragraph.
in the workshop in wednesday I wrote a process paragraph. I wrote about flower polination process. and I identified nisa's paragraph she wrote about the process of making roll bread. it was very interesting .
and the following workshop on friday, we wrote about definition paragraph. and wrote the definition of metabolism. and I identified Lilis's paragraph. she wrote the definition of envy. it was interesting title.in every workshops, I made some mistakes in my writing which I didn't realize it. but, because of it, I can improve it in the next writing assignments with other kinds of parargraph. most of my mistakes were in grammatical aspect basically.
by identfying our friends' paragraphs, I can understand my mistakes in writing, and try to improve it in our next writing.

the writing class is more interesting, and more interesting in every meeting.

hello all...

in our last meeting on wednesday, we had three presenter. the first presenter was Trias. she presented about persuasive paragraph. but we didn't agree that her paragraph was a persuasive paragraph. we thought that it was an explanation paragraph. but she was still in her opinion that her paragraph was a persuasive paragraph because of the last sentence in her paragraph. after having a long paragraph, she agreed with us.
and the second presenter was Zakki. her paragraph was clear that it was a classification paragraph. we also agreed with her. and the last presenter was Lilis. her paragraph also was clear. she presented two kinds of paragraph, those were process and classification paragraph.
then in friday, we had workshop like usual. we made classification paragraph and identified our friend's paragraph.
oh ... now I more understand how to identify paragraph by exercising regularly in Writing class.
thank you my friends and also our beloved lecturer, Miss. Vita.

same mistake in nervous day...

this week we wrote compare and contrast paragaraph, and had discussed about many kind of paragraph those are report and cause-effect paragraph.
making a kind of paragraph is easier than analyzing the kind of paragraph I think, because I often make a mistake when analyzing paragraph.   I have tried to be more aware when analyzing the kind of paragraph, but I'm still confused and doubt to decide what the paragraph it is.
from our previous discussion, I realized that I need more exercise and be more aware again to know the kind of paragraph.
in last friday, I was so nervous when Miss. Vita got angry. huffhhh....
I felt that Miss.Vita was angry because of our mistake, especially me. because I often made mistake when analyzing paragraph, it showed that I never study. whereas I have studied although I got difficulties for analyzing paragarph.  hufhhh...
I think I need more exercise and reading some books.
and one important thing which I didn't realize it, I can't be patient when reading a paragraph and just read the first sentence, and the other sentence I just read, yeah only read without concentration.
Now I have to change my bad habit for improving my knowledge.
please help me guyyssss....
I need your help. thanks. +_+