Argumentative

Dear all...
I hope you won't be bored with my reflective blog which always tell you about our writing class. In this week, we only had a workshop about argumentative paragraph. I made many mistakes in this paragraph, not only about the composition of the paragraph, but also from the grammatical aspects. hufffhhh....

last week, I identified Kajol's paragraph. she wrote about Electronic facilities in Ma'had. It was really interesting. Before I read her paragraph, I didn't know that foreign students are allowed to use electronic facilities excessively. but in her paragraph, she didn't wrote about the opposing argument. 
and about my mistakes in my paragraph, I didn't give the example in the parargraph. and also about the grammar, I think I was really careless when wrote it. 

overall, making argumentative paragraph is more difficult than making other types paragraph before. and may be the types of paragraph that we will write will be more difficult more and more.
so we have to be more spirit to learn about every kinds of paragraph.