hay guys....
this week we only had some workshops, because there was no presenter who presented their paragraph.
in the workshop in wednesday I wrote a process paragraph. I wrote about flower polination process. and I identified nisa's paragraph she wrote about the process of making roll bread. it was very interesting .
and the following workshop on friday, we wrote about definition paragraph. and wrote the definition of metabolism. and I identified Lilis's paragraph. she wrote the definition of envy. it was interesting title.in every workshops, I made some mistakes in my writing which I didn't realize it. but, because of it, I can improve it in the next writing assignments with other kinds of parargraph. most of my mistakes were in grammatical aspect basically.
by identfying our friends' paragraphs, I can understand my mistakes in writing, and try to improve it in our next writing.

the writing class is more interesting, and more interesting in every meeting.